Hey all.

Here's a little something for ya that I wrote. I don't have a melody to go with the lyrics yet, but I want opinions on them anyway, maybe a few suggestions even. I've never written a song before this, but the first verse kinda popped into my head while I was showering the other day and I couldn't get rid of it until I wrote it down.
Anyway, here goes.



Untitled Lyrics Copright Oct. 2006 Rebecca Cortazar

Feels like there's water over me
Like I'm swimming 'neath a waterfall
And the only one that sees
The only one is you.

I'm drowning underneath here
Can't seem to get away.
I need your help to breathe dear
But you stand and watch me drown.

Give your hand to me please
Can't you hear em calling out?
You turn a deaf ear on me
And stand and watch me drown.

Feels like there's water over me
Like I'm swimming 'neath a waterfall
And the only one that sees
The only one is you.

My strength is fading fast
I can't see you anymore
As I watch my life flow past
And I sink towards the floor.

Just as suddenly I realized
All along I never knew
That the only one to see me
Was only ever you.

Feels like there's water over me
Like I'm swimming 'neath a waterfall
And the only one that sees
The only one is you.

The only one was you.